A poem || Vantage Point

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This past Sunday our little one fell asleep in the car on the way to church. This meant my husband or I would end up sitting in the car with her for a few minutes so she could get a somewhat decent nap in for the morning. I didn't mind snagging a few extra minutes of quiet, so I volunteered. My few extra minutes turned into 40 minutes after which I decided to wake her and go inside lest I miss the entire service. While I enjoyed the peace and quiet, I was intrigued by a flock of birds right above our church and wrote a quick poem on my phone that I've played around with. I hope this encourages you to pay attention to the beautiful wildlife in the midst of our concrete cities and structured schedules. God is everywhere- alive and moving- inviting us to be apart of his story. 

Vantage Point
written January 21, 2024

I sat in my car

warmed by the Sunday rays, 

a chorus of golden glow 

preparing hearts for worship.

My baby slept behind me

cocooned in her carseat

while strangers and friends alike

trickled from cars through glass doors

unaware of my presence- a silent spectator. 

Then the doors closed and 

the service began.


But I remained 

watching from the outside-

a rare moment of quiet,

a new vantage point.


And from there, I noticed:


The birds convening 

where concrete corners meet,

parallel and perpendicular.

They were bright and alive

beneath the buzzing electrical lines

against the backdrop of a cloudless blue sky.


They chatted and swooped,

soared and dipped,

graceful arching circles,

with wings outstretched.

Both motion and unity,

wide and witnessing.


A worship service above our heads-

A dance of delight.

A wordless sermon.

A hymn of praise.


We would do well to pay attention. 











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